Working on a song that I want to write but am having trouble pulling the lines together...
The few cuplets that i have sound really good but they don't mesh well. I hate this. anyway, i was watching a movie and this guy does stand up and i really like his style, i'm not wanting to copy it though, so i'm just going to spend a few days doing nothing and ishing i was doing something. In the mean time i'll write down the lyrics i've come up with.

Working hard to find my place in the world
while everything falls apart

Not sure where i'm really leading my self
but it's there in my heart

I'm running away from the biggest temptation
Knowing no bound or no limitations

(This is what i want to put)
Afraid be who i wanna be
ashamed of how you see me

(This is a varient of the one above!)
Feelings are mixed
Hearts are fixed
On what they want to see
And who they want me to be

Okay that's all i'm sharing for now, if you wanna suggest any kind of help i would be greatful.